Mark Wade, ladies and gentlemen...

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...Mark Wade!

This fine musician has set my poem "Under Water" to music, sung it, played guitar, recorded himself and posted the excellent result on the web for your enjoyment at soundcloud. Click that link to listen. Here are the words:

I jumped and then I sank too deep.
I do know how to hold my breath
but the surface is too far away.

It happened on an August day.
I should have drawn a deeper breath.
I jumped and then I sank too deep.

A cruise for tourists round the bay -
a chance to sit and catch one's breath.
But now the surface is too far away.

The young crew with a sense of play
anchored for us to swim, no less.
But when I jumped I sank too deep.

I will not exhale, will not inhale,
I hold my breath, I hold my breath,
though the surface is too far away.

I break the surface. All is okay.
I take a breath, I take a breath.
And who has never sunk too deep
and found the surface too far away?



Music and performance: :iconmarkus43:

Words: :iconrichardleach:

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djailledie's avatar
So Mark wrote the music aftewards? Excellent job for both of you?