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Love walked alone. The party was nearly all
such parties ever are – faces, voices, open arms.
But she had stepped outside without a word
or sign, then left the building for the street.
There she bent down, undid her shoes and stood
on the sidewalk in bare feet. She knew the city well,
had traced many paths through it, heard many times
the same hearts beat, the same voices, the same
silences and sighs. She could hear them now.
But every walk brought surprise, and tonight
there was singing somewhere, how far away
she was not sure, but a great many voices rose.
She went in what seemed the right direction,
following the grid of streets as if herself a note
upon a score. Something under her right foot
gave way loudly. It was a shard of broken glass
her tread had ground to powder. No pain, of course,
and no harm to her, or - was that a trace of red?
She looked and sighed, walked on and shook her head.
Inspired by love walked alone by my dear friend Hanan :iconprivatedanser:
The photo above the text is hers and used by her kind permission.
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7markus7 Apr 18, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
there is a fine film noir mood on this . If it were a movie Bogart and Bacall would be starring it and the screen play would of Raymond Chandler
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RichardLeach Apr 18, 2013   Traditional Artist
thanks much, I love that take on this. I'm a Bogart and Bacall and Chandler fan from way back.
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:iconmakola94:
this is... wow.
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RichardLeach May 30, 2010   Traditional Artist
:iconbowplz: thank you!
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:iconlauratringaliholmes:
It's like a movie. Gripping, and then spinning off in a dozen different shades of emotions. Well done.
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RichardLeach Jan 11, 2010   Traditional Artist
Thanks, weeds - much appreciated.
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RichardLeach Jan 10, 2010   Traditional Artist
thanks for the read and comment!
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roovel Jan 9, 2010
an evocative.. and an unfinished story.. :)
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RichardLeach Jan 9, 2010   Traditional Artist
indeed. thanks for the read and the comment :)
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