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Sometimes you will bend,
sometimes you will break.
Sometimes you will bend,
sometimes you will break.
It may not be a choice
that you get to make.

When the breaker blows through
and you're standing alone --
when the breaker blows through
and you're standing alone,
you will feel what it does
right down to the bone.

Be canny and careful
as you go on your way.
Be canny and careful
as you go on your way.
And I hope you do not
meet the breaker today.
I started singing the opening couplet to myself a few days ago, and followed the lyric where it led.

Set to music and performed by :iconmarkus43: [link]
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partiallyHere Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2011
i met him yesterday. i bent and didn't break.
i see you wrote this before, did you see what i wrote yesterday ? (in french) i talked about the same thing , weird!

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RichardLeach Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2011   Traditional Artist
i know - i was just over at your blog, what a coincidence - and connection :hug:
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djailledie Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Canny or not, human being are strong. Let's hope we won't meet the breaker today.
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RichardLeach Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2011   Traditional Artist
Yes, may we be on a road the breaker is not taking. And thanks for the fave, J-D.
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hoaxeye Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
The breaker comes too often for sure. Well said.
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RichardLeach Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2011   Traditional Artist
Thank you sir! A short piece but it got the essentials. Thanks for the fave too.
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hoaxeye Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Most welcome.
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mehrmeer Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2011
Too bad the breaker comes way too usual on the way...

Nice verses, Richard, well done. Actually, that's life.
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RichardLeach Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2011   Traditional Artist
Thanks, Nóra. Yes it is. Being canny and careful isn't enough to keep the breaker away, but it helps a little.
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Bark Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2011  Professional Writer
Good one, but I think it could use a good chorus with a snappy tag. I guess then you'd have more of a blues-rock thing going. This one makes me wish I still had my guitar, and could growl it out in my best John Lee Hooker impression.
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